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Re: Being Me
It's not that easy being me. Keeping secrets of my memories, Shying away from any intimacy, Always enduring when I want to flee, It's not that easy being me. I ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: No Prince Charming
When I think of you, I don’t think “fairy tale come true,” Because you are so much more than that. You aren’t my “Knight in shining armor,” And I’m not ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Third Concerto
This space is filled with endless rests; a caesura would have been more kind. I count them I love that line. It's also the first time I've ever read a ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Frozen
The fire mocks me Provides warmth That will not Penetrate The skin Lost among the Times when I Could still Bear to Stick around These first two lines were good ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Hello, it's me.
avoidong I just wanted to point that one grammatical error. I love your poem especially this line. What's the dying all for? It was never like this before. Sailors whispered ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Glue
I don't get it too. It's like a soldier carrying an AK-47 fighting a gladiator carrying a sword riding on a giant dragon in the world of Apocalyptic Future where ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Traveler
When at last the sailing ship’s voyage ends, And her anchor makes home in safe harbor, The dark-haired girl steps from the deck to dock, Where merchants, sailors, and city ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
Glass-like skin melts in the sunlight; You’ve never accepted its radiance. You hide in the mid-day shadows of others, While you curse them for standing in your light. Like that ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: So Sincere
You couldn't get more emo than that... But as much of as an emo that I am I hate the message that your poem brings. I hate the people who ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: My Suicide Note
Now that is one thing you should not do, Suicide. There are still a lot of guys there and your ex boyfriend was not just the right one for you. ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: "just a memory"
I no longer fear of being alone That's one grammar mistake. It should be, "I no longer fear being alone". It's okay I don't think it will ruin the melody ...
Dec 22, 2007
